Now and then, when you open a book and begin to read, do you ever notice some books have a quote or two before the first chapter begins? Authors might use a quote to inform or focus the reader on what his/her intentions were when writing the book. Perhaps they want to point the reader in a certain direction, to focus on a character’s thought process, or what the character might go through. Many reasons, really.
When I wrote Spiral Into Darkness, I used three quotes at the beginning of the book before the first chapter to give the reader a focus, and an idea of what to expect from the book or from the setting or from a particular character. The three quotes I used are:
“We carry these things inside us
That no one else can see
They hold us down like anchors
They drown us out at sea.”
“No man chooses evil because it is evil; they only mistake it for happiness, the good he seeks.”
“The pendulum of the mind oscillates between sense and nonsense, not between right and wrong.”
I used these quotes primarily to give the reader a window to the antagonist’s thinking. On the surface, the antagonist moves through the world just as you or I would. The antagonist is successful and smart, if not brilliant. Just below the surface, there is an anger that builds up and bubbles over, spilling out and soiling those he comes in contact with. Such is the nature, or at least, one nature of a serial killer.
My serial killer is methodical and organized. The killer plans and organizes the kill. The killer in my book has a reason for the murders, but that reason is unknown to the protagonists (yes, multiple protagonists). That drives law enforcement crazy- no pun intended. Law enforcement is trained to look for patterns and seek to find the ‘why’ behind a killing. When there is no identifiable pattern to the killing, other than the method, law enforcement is left scratching their heads, hoping there isn’t another murder before they find the killer. And yet, it is only with another murder that might lead them closer to finding the killer.
While law enforcement in my books have had their share of handling tough to solve cases, including murders, the kids in my fictional family have no experience with psychosis or a sociopath. They are drawn unwillingly into the serial killer’s orbit without a clue one or more might be an intended victim.
I also used these three quotes to help create the setting of the book. It’s winter in Wisconsin. Cold, windy, snowy and icy. It can be mild one day and brutal the next. Much like my antagonist, the serial killer.
In my book, Betrayed, I used three quotes as well. They are:
“You never know how strong you are until being strong is your only choice.”
“Courage doesn’t mean you aren’t afraid. Courage means you don’t let fear stop you.”
“In the solemnity of endings, we find hope in new beginnings.”
In my last post, I wrote about book titles and the thought process that goes into them. I wrote my books can have, and most do have, multiple meanings in their titles. Betrayed is one of those titles that has multiple meanings.
The first two quotes give you a clue what one or more of my protagonists are going to go through. Two of the three brothers thought they were going on a fun hunting trip in Navajo country in Northeast Arizona. Little do they know they become the hunted. They don’t know why until the end of the book. Two of the three have never been to Navajoland. George, one of their adopted brothers, grew up in that country, but he is off ‘hunting’ for his missing childhood friend. He doesn’t realize his two brothers are in jeopardy.
The last quote gives a clue to the outcome, the ending of the book. The reader will, eventually, understand this quote pertains to one protagonist specifically. By combining these three quotes, I give the reader a window to what they will encounter between and among the pages.
In my newest book, Fan Mail, I use three quotes differently from my other books. They are:
“When I get hate mail, I get really down on myself, and I read it to my mom, and my mom is like, ‘So what? Who cares? These people don’t know you, so you can’t take praise or hate to heart.’”
“From the deepest desires often come the deadliest hate.”
“Heroes aren’t born, but they are created in times of strife and struggle. Everyone is capable of being a hero in their own way; often without even knowing it, they are a hero to those around them.”
The first quote from Nikki Reed is related to the book’s title. It tells the reader up front what the major action of the book is going to be. I don’t pull any punches … maybe. Even the title, Fan Mail, tells the reader what the book is about. Nothing ambiguous about it. I smile knowingly.
The second quote by Socrates gives the reader the opportunity to look inside the antagonist’s head. What the antagonist is thinking, and how that thinking drives the antagonist’s actions.
The third quote applies to one of the main protagonists, but can, perhaps, apply to more than one. I like this quote because it describes one of the character’s journey. Being who he is, he is quick to deflect the hero word to others, but I don’t think the reader will allow that.
I like using quotes because not only does it help the reader on their journey from cover to cover, it also helps me, the writer, to keep focused on the what I’m writing. As I said in an earlier post, writers/authors (I use the two terms interchangeably) choose their words and create their sentences and paragraphs with great care (or at least, they should). We are specific in our word choice, in the actions taken by our characters, including what they think and what they feel. Using quotes helps the writer in this specificity. It keeps our feet firmly planted on the path we chose to write.
I would like to know what you think, so please feel free to use the section below for comments. As always, I thank you for following me on this writing journey.
One last thing: my publisher and I are running a Goodreads Giveaway. 5 copies of my newest book, Fan Mail, will be signed and given away in a random drawing to five lucky individuals. But you have to hurry. Time is running out. You can enter the Fan Mail Goodreads Giveaway by using this link: https://www.goodreads.com/giveaway/enter_choose_address/365972?utm_medium=api&utm_source=giveaway_widget and Good Luck!
Fan Mail: New Release! A Maxy Award Finalist, an Eric Hoffer Award Nominee, and a Literary Titan Silver Book Award Winner!
A barrage of threatening letters, a car bomb, and a heart attack rip apart what was once a close-knit family of adopted brothers. Randy and Bobby, along with fellow band member and best friend, Danny, receive fan mail that turns menacing. They ignore it, but to their detriment. The sender turns up the heat. Violence upends their world. It rocks the relationship between the boys and ripples through their family, nearly killing their dad.
As these boys turn on each other, adopted brother Brian flashes back to that event in Arizona where he nearly lost his life saving his brothers. The scars on his face and arms healed, but not his heart.
Would he once again have to put himself in harm’s way to save them? And if faced with that choice, will he? https://amzn.to/3eNgSdS
Blaze In, Blaze Out: Best Action Crime Thriller of 2022 by Best Thrillers! A Literary Titan Gold Book Award Winner! A Readers’ Favorite Award Winner! A Reader’s Ready Recommended Read! A BestThriller’s Editor’s Pick!
Detectives Eiselmann and O’Connor thought the conviction of Dmitry Andruko, the head of a Ukrainian crime family, meant the end. It was only the beginning. They forgot that revenge knows no boundaries, vindictiveness knows no restraints, and ruthlessness never worries about collateral damage. Andruko hired contract killers to go after and kill O’Connor and Eiselmann.
The killers can be anyone and be anywhere. They can strike at any time. They care nothing of collateral damage. Andruko believes a target is a target, and in the end, the target must die. https://amzn.to/34lNllP
Betrayed: Two Top Shelf Awards: 1st Place Fiction-Mystery; and Runner-Up Fiction-Crime; A PenCraft 1st Place Winner for Thriller-Fiction! A Maxy Award Runner-Up for Mystery/Suspense! A Literary Titan Silver Book Award Winner! A Reader’s Ready Recommended Read Award Winner! A Reader’s Favorite Honorable Mention Award Winner for Fiction-Crime-Mystery!
Betrayed is Now Available in Audio Book, Kindle and Paperback! https://amzn.to/3AfUUpS
A late-night phone call, a missing kid, a murdered family, but no one is talking. A promise is made and kept, but it could mean the death of a fifteen-year-old boy. Greed can be all-consuming, and seeing is not believing. No one can be trusted, and the hunters become the hunted. https://amzn.to/2EKHudx
Spiral Into Darkness: Named a Recommended Read in the Author Shout Reader Awards!
He blends in. He is successful, intelligent, and methodical. So far, he has murdered eight people. There is no discernible pattern. There are no clues. There are no leads. The only thing the FBI and local police have to go on is the method of death: two bullets to the face- gruesome and meant to send a message. But it’s difficult to understand any message coming from a dark and damaged mind. Two adopted boys, struggling in their own world, do not know they are the next targets. Neither does their family. And neither does local law enforcement. https://amzn.to/2RBWvTm
Caught in a Web: A PenCraft Literary Award Winner! Named “One of the Best Thrillers of 2018!” by BestThrillers.com
Caught in a Web is also available in Audio Book, Kindle and Paperback! http://bit.ly/2WO3kka
They found the bodies of high school and middle school kids dead from an overdose of heroin and fentanyl. A violent gang, MS-13, controls the drug trade along the I-94 and I-43 corridors. They send Ricardo Fuentes to find out who is cutting in on their business, shut it down and teach them a lesson. But he has an ulterior motive: find and kill a fifteen-year-old boy, George Tokay.
Detectives Jamie Graff, Pat O’Connor and Paul Eiselmann race to find the source of the drugs, shut down the ring, and find Fuentes before he kills anyone else. https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07CKF7696
The Lives Trilogy Prequel, Taking Lives:
FBI Agent Pete Kelliher and his partner search for the clues behind the bodies of six boys left in various and remote parts of the country. Even though they live in separate parts of the country, the lives of Kelliher, 11-year-old Brett McGovern, and 11-year-old George Tokay are separate pieces of a puzzle. The two boys become interwoven with the same thread Kelliher holds in his hand. The three of them are on a collision course and when that happens, their futures grow dark as each search for a way out. https://amzn.to/34nXBH5
Book One, Stolen Lives: Editor’s Pick by BestThrillers! Literary Titan Gold Book Award Winner! A Crime Thriller finalist in the 2021 Best Thriller Book Awards!
Two thirteen-year-old boys are abducted off a safe suburban street. Kelliher and his team of FBI agents have 24 hours to find them or they will end up like the other kids they found- dead! They have no leads, no clues, and nothing to go on. To make the investigation that much tougher, Kelliher suspects that one of his team members might be involved. https://amzn.to/3oMo4qZ
Book Two of the Lives Trilogy, Shattered Lives:
The boys are home, but now they have to fit back in with their families and friends. Their parents and the FBI thought the boys were safe. They were until people began dying. Now the hunt is on for six dangerous and desperate men who vow revenge. With no leads and nothing to go on, the FBI can only sit back and wait. A dangerous game that threatens not only the boys, but their families. https://amzn.to/2RAYIk2
Book Three of the Lives Trilogy, Splintered Lives:
Three dangerous men with nothing to lose offer a handsome reward to anyone willing to kill fourteen-year-old Brett McGovern. He does not know that he, his younger brother, and a friend are targets. More than anyone, these three men vow to kill George, whom they blame for forcing them to run and hide. A fun vacation turns into a nightmare and ends where it started, back on the Navajo Nation Reservation, high on a mesa held sacred by George and his grandfather. Outnumbered and outgunned, George will make the ultimate sacrifice to protect his adoptive father and his adoptive brothers- but can he? Without knowing who these men are? Or where they are? Without knowing whom to trust? Is he prepared for betrayal that leads to his heartbreak and death? http://bit.ly/SplinteredLives
2 thoughts on “Use of Quotes in a Book”
I like book quotes and think they can set the tone of the story. You chose some excellent ones for your serial killer, Joe.
Thank you, Teri! That means a great deal.
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